Nice! I love the conclusion to it great!

I reeeeally like this Swoopy babeh! *hugs* The rythm patterning is very impressive and somehow gives off an impression of all fo their actions being desperate for eachother and rushed...hmmm very nice *mwah*

Cheers, Pet. The conclusion is delayed as much as possible. I'm a big fan of teasing. Hehehe. I'm an evil bastard when I wanna be. Glad ya enjoyed it.

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"To see a world in a grain of sand
& a heaven in a wild flower
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
& eternity in an hour"

This does descibe rushing, by my standards. lol. I was mainly trying to convey a sense of longing though so I'm glad ya picked up on it. The rhythm was a bit difficult to work out when writing but I think the end result worked out OK. Cheers, Pet. Glad ya liked it.

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"To see a world in a grain of sand
& a heaven in a wild flower
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
& eternity in an hour"

Yes that's why I liked it so much, because it was delayed
Hehe, teasing can be nice sometimes

Teasing rocks. Heh. The best part is the waitin and the anticipation. The longer the wait, the more ya enjoy bein rewarded for ya patience. Gotta be tantric about everythin in life which is worth savourin. Ever seen the episode of Ally MacBeal with the coffee drinkin lessons...?

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"To see a world in a grain of sand
& a heaven in a wild flower
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
& eternity in an hour"

No I haven't seen that ally macbeal
Yes, waiting and anticipation for something you really want is the best... tension ...
just like the best part of a relationship is the flirting

definitely felt that sense of longing. the imagery is great, at least i can see them all playful and hesitant i love it, it FEELS like a first kiss. lol.

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"as black as the night can get, everything is safer now, there's always a way to forget, once you learn to find a way how..."

"yeah, words mean things." - b. morris -

Flirtin rocks big time!!! It's a bit like the calm before a storm...

In the said episode of Ally MacBeal, Ally recieves a lecture on how to drink coffe in a very sensual manner. She starts by smellin it and baiting herself with the aroma. Then, after taking a few moments to let her sinusses appreciate that delight, she touches the tip of her tongue to the liquid but doesn't drink any. Eventually, she works her way up to sipping. By the time she takes a big gulp, she really enjoys it as she gets the most outta the taste for her efforts.

I also noticed a food programme once, in which a proper coffee taster explained how they suck it over their tongue and onto the roof of their mouth to spread the taste fully. I merge both perculiar examples so that I really appreciate a good cuppa (albeit that I'm fairly clueless when it comes to the HUGE range of different blends ya can get).

Hope this has been enlightening for ya. lol

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"To see a world in a grain of sand
& a heaven in a wild flower
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand
& eternity in an hour"